Not a bad effort but I must say my eyes aren't sure where to look. All the blinking in different directions keeps moving my eye around without ever really settling on something long enough to take it in.
Also, why is every pic censored except for one? If you are trying to show them that they have to pay to see the hardcore than don't show it on the front page.
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