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ahh. not to burst your bubble, but that is a lame email. To much talking, and what do you mean, your future wifes flirtatious demeanour? He knows her number and where she lives? not to mention there is more?
I would think about THAT first.
The letter is good, but leave out the insecurities and the threats. Just make your position clear, and he'll figure out the rest after being fucked in a thai prison.
My 2 cents
R
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