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If you're going to have a one page tour like that, you really need to make sure it packs a punch. It's not that well laid out from a marketing standpoint, and it could really use some polishing from a graphics standpoint.
I would put in a bunch of ten second clips, if not a few 30 second clips -- oh and keep the pop shot off the clips -- initial conversions without it should be fine, then if they start to slack off you can occasionally put one in there to bust them back up. There's no real animation on the page, nothing much to catch the surfers eye, just a bunch of almost random seeming placement of stuff.
I hope I'm not being too negative, am just stating what I see --
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