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You may discount my critique if you like...I don't care but the fact is I shoot magazine layouts for many major publications including Genesis, Hustler and tons more. What I do on my sites is intentionally amateurish.
If you aren't open to learn how to be better you won't get any better.
first of all learn to shoot good photos without using photoshop then learn to use photoshop to make them a bit better without evidence that they were photoshopped.
Technically theres about a zillion things wrong with that pic including the composition (learn the rule of thirds)
You subject is under exposed but at least a half stop
The book case looks as though its on the side of a hill....always compose your shots with straight edges straight up and down or across.
have your model wear colors that compliment the background and when she wears stockings make sure they are the same height on both legs
shall I continue?
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Mike South
It's No wonder I took up drugs and alcohol, it's the only way I could dumb myself down enough to cope with the morons in this biz.
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