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Old 09-13-2006, 02:21 PM  
Shaze
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Originally Posted by RawAlex
Okay, I was going to get all picky on this or that, color this, move that, whatever...

The I realized the issue with this page is truly very simple and very clear:

There is no attempt to sell, and more importantly, no attempt to close the sale. It is a very pretty page, nice colors, pretty girls in the headers, but you never ask for the sale. You have no call to action, no involvement terms, nothing highlighted.

If you don't ask for the sale, it won't sell.

Alex
Good suggestions RawAlex. You have any ideas for the text or maybe a link to a sample site that does what you just mentioned????
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