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the headline does not catch my attention and make me want to read the first sentence
what ever that is above the headline does nothing for the site either
you provide no proof that graphics/clip art increase conversions
there are no bullets
what's in red in the body is not most important
there are no well known sites as examples that use graphics/clip art
you do not create/stimulate immediate desire for graphics & clip art
your page is not a good example of graphics/clip art in use
I could go on but I dont want you to get the wrong idea
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