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Old 10-29-2002, 11:47 AM  
Amputate Your Head
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you've no doubt put alot of time into this Flash interface, because I know.... Flash is just too cool for school.... BUT, your basic graphic skills aren't up to snuff, and no amount of fancy Flash can hide that. It's like giving a '72 Pinto a new paintjob: it looks better than it did before, but underneath, it's still a rolling nightmare.

Specifics:

1. The backgrounding graphics look pretty good. (What's up with the lake rising and sinking though?)

2. Your main image cuts are a little rough, lack clarity and depth.

3. The overall concept tries desperately to come across as 'tech', but falls short from lack of definition and sharpness. It's almost like, you got halfway there, and then mixed it with some half-baked cartoony stuff to hurry up and get it done.

4. Your interface as a whole lacks solid positioning.... no matter how I look at it, I still feel as though something has slipped out of place and I'm unable to put it back where it belongs.... and that is VERY irritating.

I think your Flash work is promising... with time, you'll be one seriously scary Flasher. But your graphic skills need more shop time.

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