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Originally posted by neewwman
Your text is full of misspellings, ungrammatical English, sentence fragments, run-on sentences and improper capitalization. The sentences should have two spaces after them, not one. All of this is distracting and some of it is not even comprehensible.
Hope that's helpful. The rest of the site needs a thorough proofreading by a native speaker of English. There are many, many other mistakes and hard-to-understand passages.
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I'd have to agree with this comment. It was so hard to read through it all that I wound up closing it out before I even finished your tour. That's not good. You definately don't want your surfers to react that way. Getting this corrected should be your
FIRST PRIORITY. The rest of the site isn't bad at all, but this is a real bite in the ass.