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it looks like you haven't been doing stuff like this for very long. not only is the club name hard to read - and let's face it, you only have 1 second before people stop trying - but it just doesn't say "party" to me.
i think dr dre had some useful things to say and hopefully you'll really focus on them even if it does hurt to have someone criticize your work. his examples are great party/club flyers that are easy to read, have plenty of breathing space, and use the effects to enhance the overall message rather than just putting words on a background.
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