you might want to shrink the top logo - nothing about it makes me want to click. Better to have a nasty text link on the bottom of the page, that is where the surfer will wind up, anyway.
But it looks pretty good, and it is already better than a large % of the pages I see around - plus it is legal content
If you want to submit to two thumbnail preview teen sites, I'll list it, no problem.
http://www.teenhosebags.com/submit.shtml